Running commentary from a Beta reader:
It is very well written so far. I was concerned about front loading a lot of the information about the history of what changed the world,but you have managed to keep it simple.
At 80 pages in. I like and hate New Jerusalem. I like it because I hate it and that means that it is well written as it evokes an emotional response.
Pg 159. Jared is a dick and I am sad that when Jadyn finds out that it will devastate him.